Research Proposal & Research Plan

English 21003, Section M
Professor Matyakubova
17 October 2017
Research Proposal

All Lives Matter: The Injustice System
          As recent as this month, the United States witnessed the deadliest modern mass shooting. Murdering 59 people and injuring around 480 innocent lives at a concert is certainly traumatizing. This action is addressed as criminal behavior, the act is prohibited by law and punished by the state.
It causes serious psychological stress or mental damage to the victim. The main issue about criminology, the scientific study of crimes and criminals, is why does it happen? Many factors around the criminal are reasons why the violence is triggered. Why do criminals cause the violence that they do? What is the benefit of their results? And why are their actions excusable based on their race? Is it because the criminal justice system allows the convict to act in any way they desire? Are more gun laws going to solve this issue? Lastly, aside from their reasons, is it because the way we think is based on human nature? Criminal behavior could be caused by many factors, making it difficult for the way the U.S. criminal justice system handles convicts.
There are a few theories as to why criminals are affected a certain way to drive them into causing a lot of ferocity. This conflict isn’t going on only in the United States but this aggression comes from people that live normal lives, which can be labeled as terrorists or unknown to becoming a criminal. Examples of theories that can affect a criminal is their psychological, biological, and sociological state. In addition, to those motives is how the setup of the criminal justice system could perhaps grant felons the chance to cause the violence they do, further research is required.
To clarify any of the causes for why felons behave in this violent manner, research will be made from various newspaper articles, scholarly articles and peer-reviewed journals from the databases provided, and an interview with an expert. Many sides of the research will be based on forensic science along with other fields to determine the cause of the hostility. Additional research for examples of articles must be prepared after narrowing the thesis and questions that were previously discussed.
The research that will be provided will mention many scientific viewpoints including forensic science and psychology. Moreover, potential solutions will be mentioned, such as an increase in gun laws. The paper will conclude with possible ways they can lessen their violent behavior.

Works Cited

Admin. “Criminal Behavior.” Criminal Psychology, www.e-criminalpsychology.com/criminal-behavior/.

Bui, Lynh, et al. “At Least 59 Killed in Las Vegas Shooting Rampage, More than 500 Others Injured.” The Washington Post, WP Company, 2 Oct. 2017, www.washingtonpost.com/news/morning-mix/wp/2017/10/02/police-shut-down-part-of-las-vegas-strip-due-to-shooting/?utm_term=.42185aa1f6ef.

Ho, Sally. “Dozens Gravely Wounded in Las Vegas Shooting Face Long Road to Recovery.” The Denver Post, The Denver Post, 14 Oct. 2017, www.denverpost.com/2017/10/14/las-vegas-shooting-victims-recovery/.

“What Is the Definition of Criminal Behavior?” Regis Criminology Programs, 6 Jan. 2017, http://criminology.regis.edu/criminology-programs/resources/crim-articles/definition-criminal-behavior.


English 21003, Section M
Professor Matyakubova
17 October 2017
Research Proposal Reflection   

            While thinking of a topic to discuss in my research proposal, I found many articles that mentioned different topics. Then the idea of mass shootings and the extreme violence that is currently going on grabbed my attention. After searching about criminology, there were so many questions that arose from searching about the Las Vegas shooting that occurred recently. All the questions made it more difficult as to what my thesis should be. I must do more research on what articles I should include for my research paper. It is a bit hard formatting this research paper because I have never written one, neither did I ever write a research proposal before.
            I learned about how to write a research proposal based on the sample research proposal provided. The purpose of it is to discuss what will be in the research paper. It reminds me of an abstract but a bit longer. Since my topic is very broad, I am in the process of looking for relevant sources. That is why I did not include such reliable sources in my research proposal but I’ve written my proposal according to the sources I provided as a start for the outline of the paper.


 Rahmah Hussein
English 21003, Section M
Professor Matyakubova
24 October 2017
Research Concept-Map, Thesis, Outline
Behind Bars

Research Thesis and Detailed Outline





Thesis: Criminal behavior can occur because of societal reactions and the U.S. Criminal Justice cruel system.
What causes criminal behavior, and does the U.S. criminal justice system adequately address the causes?/ Why does the U.S. criminal justice system excuse crimes based on their race?

(Intro) Body Paragraph #1: Definition of criminal behavior and its possible causes.
Body Paragraph #2: Description of punishments in the Justice System.
Para. #3: Speaking about how punishments are very unfair (similar punishments regardless of crime).
Para. #4: More Evidence of Para #3.
Para. #5: Racial issues are impacting the Justice system. (Because of some races are superior to the others)
Para. #6: More Evidence of Para #5.
Para. #7: Criminal behavior can be triggered from many origins such as, psychological and sociological environments.
Para #8: Solutions as to how to benefit criminals in the long run with evidence.
Para #9: More Evidence supporting Para #8.
Para #10: Concluding Paragraph



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